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Hi , Alex nice work on your poem it remedies me about winter. I think you could work on putting more adjectives on your blog post. I can't wait for your next blog post bye. from Zach
Kia ora ,Alex I liked how you created heaps of diffrent poems and sentences I liked the first one it reminds me of me in the winter time.Keep up the amazing work buddy. From Whare
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Hi Alex this winter poem is cool but put your name in the top please so then we can see who the author is. (.`.)
ReplyDeletethank you and i will Put my name in. (:
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ReplyDeletenice work on your poem it remedies me about winter.
I think you could work on putting more adjectives on your blog post.
I can't wait for your next blog post bye. from Zach
Kia ora ,Alex I liked how you created heaps of diffrent poems and sentences I liked the first one it reminds me of me in the winter time.Keep up the amazing work buddy.
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